The fiery dragon weeps
the hot tears
that are the warmth to my
isolated body.
They disintegrated at the
touch of my skin and
fall off my fingertips
leaving a trail of their past.
My mind and my body are in
two different worlds.
My body experiencing the
warmth of the waterfall,
and my mind connecting the
memory of pain to the
heat on my body that is
welcoming yet
unforgivable.
This is another original poem I wrote a while ago. I wasn't sure whether I should post it or not because I'm not to sure if it's good enough but nevertheless, I have decided to. The inspiration behind it is actually a shower. I have used some metaphors and connections in the poem. I literally did think of this as I was showering and from there I added more on about the feeling and what it was like. Hope you guys enjoy it! Leave a comment on what you think of it and what I could to to make it better, or if you just liked it.
Sammie <3
Glad to see you are still writing poetry and sharing it. Your last two lines are haunting. Keep at it, okay.
ReplyDeleteMs. P
Will do :)
DeleteSammie <3